The Lord Of Fire is going to destroy Earth and all the 6 billion people. Tom the Japanese boy is born to fight The Lords Of Pain, his sensei that helped him all his life, and was like a father to him is actually a traitor and his worst enemy.
The Dragon, The Lord Of Fire.
Tom
Are the characters credible?
What Point is the book written?
Its written from omniscient point of view. The storyteller can see Tom's thoughts and follows him around.
Problem
Can I relate?
If I could change anything..
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He saw that he didn't need to beat Dragon just because he wanted to get back at him. He needed to beat Dragon because the world was counting on him to do so. All these people on the heath doing their everyday things, living their everyday lives, was counting on him. Tom was their knight in shining armor, their only hope, even if they had no way of knowing it. Without him they were doomed.
Why do I like this paragraph?
Do I like this book?
The book reminds me of the book/movie Avatar, so its good for smaller children or teenagers who loves unnatural things,adventure and Magic. I'll give it three stars because i think its a good book, but I think its a little boring at the start where the small family is arguing with the other half of the family.